CK Lynn

Hi afeefah! Here's the review! (sorry it took so long, I've been having some trouble with my computer.) First of all, I like the concept of this story. But I ...

I liked the idea of the poem, but the way it was executed left me underwhelmed. First, you need to capitalize at the beginning of each sentance. This is a ...

I like this a lot. I was expecting a clichd, emo poem about lost love, but this really took me by surprise! I think this would flow better, though, if ...

Wow! I have friend who's into tarot, so I understand the symbols, and this was an excellnt usage of those! I especially like the two lines about the priestess and ...

I really like the way this poem sounds. It has a very nice flow and the words chosen match the solemn-ess of the subject. Also, I usually find something wrong ...

This was pretty good, but you need to expand on your ideas. There's a lot about the secrecy of the question and not much emotion. This poem didn't really make ...

I think this would be better suited for the lyrics section. It sounds like more of a song by the Fray than a poem, but that could just be me. ...

This was a very interesting poem. I'm not really sure what it was about, but it had a very nice atmosphere and a lot of good lines. I agree with ...

If I were you, I would change the title. It doesn't portray the emotions of this poem. Really, I was expecting something much less...serious, I guess, and was pleasantly surprised. ...

I liked how this flowed and sounded, but there was something missing. I wish it was a verse or two longer so I could get more of a feel for ...

I get the poem, but it needs a new title. It also needs to be expanded upon, in order for your ideas to get across. This s a good start, ...

The rhyme in this poem is very good. I didn't even see that it was liek that until I reread it. There are two lines that seem out of place. ...

This was very hard to understand, even with the preface, and I'm Christian. While you had some interesting lines and imagery, it didn't hold my attetion. I couldn't get to ...

I sincerely do not know what this poem is about. It begins first with one voice and one theme and keeps getting more convoluted. There are many good lines, but ...

I didn't get much from this poem. Maybe that's how it was meant to be, just a kind of a fun, quick little piece, in which case disregard everything I ...